tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2928266058320305901.post4087174308694728344..comments2023-06-15T15:06:30.294+01:00Comments on The Moonlit Door: First Campaigner Challenge: HomeLisamarie Lambhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13044677750551861221noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2928266058320305901.post-89473267976497177562011-09-19T12:21:13.960+01:002011-09-19T12:21:13.960+01:00Thank you all very much :)Thank you all very much :)Lisamarie Lambhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044677750551861221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2928266058320305901.post-37173782159902143922011-09-13T13:14:41.650+01:002011-09-13T13:14:41.650+01:00Full of emotion, Lisamarie. I felt the sadness in...Full of emotion, Lisamarie. I felt the sadness in the first person POV.Len Lamberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13394563639136301725noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2928266058320305901.post-54716770517280285302011-09-13T05:59:23.241+01:002011-09-13T05:59:23.241+01:00Oh, very moving and sad. Full of regret.
Mine is...Oh, very moving and sad. Full of regret.<br /><br />Mine is #291: http://thewarriormuse.blogspot.com/2011/09/first-campaign-challenge-flash-fiction.htmlShannon Lawrencehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00934641808195675935noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2928266058320305901.post-30380628614182658502011-09-12T18:19:22.040+01:002011-09-12T18:19:22.040+01:00Excellent pacing and imagery. I feel sad after rea...Excellent pacing and imagery. I feel sad after reading your entry, but in a good way.<br /><br />Great job, Lisamarie! :)David P. Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17259276981865439853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2928266058320305901.post-72252530953392542011-09-12T10:19:32.764+01:002011-09-12T10:19:32.764+01:00Lisamarie Lamb... you're a legend xLisamarie Lamb... you're a legend xSarahpd229https://www.blogger.com/profile/17154468382882446926noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2928266058320305901.post-33692211937852163122011-09-11T21:14:05.992+01:002011-09-11T21:14:05.992+01:00Ellen - amazing, thank you so much, that's rea...Ellen - amazing, thank you so much, that's really exciting! <br /><br />Mish - thank you :)Lisamarie Lambhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044677750551861221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2928266058320305901.post-83966717013301835772011-09-11T10:34:21.214+01:002011-09-11T10:34:21.214+01:00Sad and wistful ! A great job !
My entry is no.#59...Sad and wistful ! A great job !<br />My entry is no.#59Michelle Wallacehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02750092836481599870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2928266058320305901.post-3210654946242758762011-09-11T00:30:53.519+01:002011-09-11T00:30:53.519+01:00Hey there! Just wanted to let you know, I'm wo...Hey there! Just wanted to let you know, I'm working as a judge on this particular campaign, and you've been shortlisted to move up to the semifinals! Which means you're one of 38 entries in the final round (out of 384 entries total). Congratulations!!!<br />I loved the voice and emotion in your piece, really made me want to know more about the narrator. :)Ellenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17202494819302527977noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2928266058320305901.post-33608169323810376902011-09-10T08:41:09.853+01:002011-09-10T08:41:09.853+01:00Erin - wow, thank you! I'm really excited, and...Erin - wow, thank you! I'm really excited, and I think I'll be spending a lot of time reading the other entries today. <br /><br />Thank you again!Lisamarie Lambhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044677750551861221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2928266058320305901.post-86405735898984196922011-09-10T08:40:07.172+01:002011-09-10T08:40:07.172+01:00Thank you, everyone, I'm so glad it moved you....Thank you, everyone, I'm so glad it moved you. I wasn't sure whether it would work or not, almost didn't post it, but I'm glad I did!Lisamarie Lambhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044677750551861221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2928266058320305901.post-68061858189106086172011-09-10T06:00:35.257+01:002011-09-10T06:00:35.257+01:00Congratulations, Lisamarie!
Your flash fiction h...Congratulations, Lisamarie! <br /><br />Your flash fiction has been chosen to go on to stage two of the competition. There will be a semi-final (stage three) and a final (stage four). Good luck with the next stages.<br /><br />I really enjoyed your submit - having lost my own mom just last year, this really touched a chord with me. Excellent job to be able to do that, in so few words.Erin L. Schneiderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13724907482299321322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2928266058320305901.post-84936110517591899832011-09-09T19:47:56.450+01:002011-09-09T19:47:56.450+01:00A sad piece--but great writing, and a different PO...A sad piece--but great writing, and a different POV from the usual. :)<br /><br /><a href="http://thegoldeneaglesblog.blogspot.com/2011/09/first-campaigner-challenge-200-word.html" rel="nofollow">My entry</a>.Golden Eaglehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08721520451194318436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2928266058320305901.post-1118932757990642842011-09-09T19:32:41.902+01:002011-09-09T19:32:41.902+01:00Ugh, so sad! Great job at writing such a moving pi...Ugh, so sad! Great job at writing such a moving piece in 200 words! :)Amanda Milnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07582468814920761586noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2928266058320305901.post-2141218758330353352011-09-09T18:39:25.065+01:002011-09-09T18:39:25.065+01:00Nice job that's a hard thing. Mine is #72Nice job that's a hard thing. Mine is #72Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2928266058320305901.post-51645302889490416552011-09-09T15:55:35.855+01:002011-09-09T15:55:35.855+01:00Lots of emotion packed into these 200 words. Great...Lots of emotion packed into these 200 words. Great job.CherylAnne Hamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02324135447961686703noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2928266058320305901.post-91229637627330515222011-09-09T12:15:57.098+01:002011-09-09T12:15:57.098+01:00Oh, that's just too sad. I was going through a...Oh, that's just too sad. I was going through all those emotions with your character. I think the second person pov works wonders sometimes, and it's so easy to get wrong, but you haven't. I love this. <br /><br />(I didn't know you were on the challenge. It's great to see familiar faces.)Sylviahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02913456656863545074noreply@blogger.com